|Reviews for Wealthy|
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
i like this better than the others, the writing here is also good. there is description and i liked the comparasion."spoiling me with extravagant, unnecessary things"
what i got from reading this is that the person talking feels he's unworthy of the attention of the guy being talked about, right? that's why i like it, creative is the way you presented it!
| Isca chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
"His gaze was rich." I really like the way in which the word 'rich' here compliments the 'coin' imagery in the previous line - suggesting that the wealthy man is ruled solely by avarice.
"Spoiling me with extravagant, unnecessary things." Good. I'm glad that you ended this piece with the words 'extravagant' and 'unnecessary' - they show the reader that the speaker is a little affronted by the wealthy man's romantic pursuit of her.
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