Reviews for BRIDE
Fan Rider Ryu chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
BRIDE Kick! Great way to start off a Tokusatsu story!
Van Quatra chapter 13 . 10/1/2010
ok i defenitly need to see drawings of lauren, her BRIDE form and her exceed form, reading about it is cool but seeing it would be so much cooler, hope you cazn help with that
Ds14 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
I like this story. You've clearly put a lot of thought into the characters themselves and that makes this story a fun read. Keep up the good work :-D
Serenity Productions chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Great story!

-Serenity :]
Luna the wolf dancer chapter 6 . 2/2/2010
I love Bradley - He's cool! and the story is very good too, I like how this is connected to your Shoel story D keep up the good work

Luna the wolf dancer chapter 5 . 11/21/2009
0-0 holy crow man lots of description, um.. I think you have to put ("..") when you have characters' thoughts 0-0 This could have more characterization, but then again I wouldn't know, I may see it more as the story continues XD. Bottom line is good job on the chapter and nice fighting scenes -
Luna the wolf dancer chapter 4 . 11/16/2009
I like the fighting scenes I been reading )
Frayling0 chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
Great start to the chapter - keeping it vague so we had to guess, then revealing she had gotten to hospital from her injuries. I truly thought Lauren was a goner for a moment :( Katana's FTW! Great chapter... and that last line was superb and a tad funny haha! Good job. ~ Luke
Luna the wolf dancer chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
very nice job ) maybe I will read more of this, congrats on finishing this story
Frayling0 chapter 5 . 9/4/2009
The way you open your chapters with such dry and vivid description amazes me, you are truly one of the best writers on here. As for the ending, cliffhanger! I hope Lauren's going to be ok... great work! - Luke
Frayling0 chapter 4 . 9/2/2009
'Toronto now had a guardian angel'... This is beautiful and a fitting last line! I'm still greatly enjoying this story, the whole superhero theme is right up my street. Can't wait to see where the plot takes me next! - Luke
Frayling0 chapter 3 . 9/1/2009
Haha great chapter! Leon got his comeuppance. Lauren and Denji - the dynamics were written really well. As always your writing flows exceptionally, and your grammar is spot on. Some great ideas here. I cannot wait to see what happens next. ~ Luke
ZenryokuKirby chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I don't know why, but this strangely sounds like The game series "Resident evil". Same format, but also very different at the same time...
Frayling0 chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
Your such a good writer... I wish my grammar was as perfect as you! Loved the last line. Without dropping giant cliffhangers, you always leave me wanting more - that's a good skill. Your characters are realistic, it makes me feel like I'm watching a TV show. Can't wait to see what Lauren does next. ~ Luke. P.S, I review on the basis of the 'pay it forward' system. If you haven't heard of it, I generally would like some reviews back if I'm taking my time reading your story. I don't need loads, just when you have time. Direct them to Time of Kings please. Cheers!
Frayling0 chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
I am so surprised this only has 1 review! Seems a bit unfair considering your writing is nigh on perfect. Your grammar and flow are spot on, and this is better than published books I have read. I love superhero stuff as well... although I haven't read Sheol this was superb... and the ending promises more to come. Great start, just enough to keep me captivated! ~ Luke
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