Wow. Cliffhanger much? This looks real interesting. I'm excited for the next chapter. Who knows, maybe you decided this kid had a concussion in the past, and suddenly BOOM! goes the memories of the dream-dude she actually knew already? Or you wanted this person to be psychic or magical or something? XD I'm not gonna try to guess TOO hard, because your flow is clueless to a compass for me. Hope you keep adding to this!

OMG when are you going to come back to this because it is spazztastically amazing!...or something like that...i've been a butt and stuck to reading your complete stories so I could avoid the whole 'no update without review' stuff that some peeps do- but ZOMG if you don't finish this I'll, um, puke a magical rainbow that will connect her to there and kick your shin! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

hm, I love the ideas that this story has. I wish you would update.

i love the sound of this story so far! pleasepleasepleaseplease update! :):):)

Ah, Artie's pretty cool :)

Update soon? :)

(You see, I'm a dedicated reader.)

Wo! I like it... a lot! And the narrator's slightly insane which is always fun :) Can't wait to see what happens. Update soon!

LOVIN it so far, it sounds very complex, complex that is good and intrigueing (I think that's how you spell it). I cannot WAIT to read your next update, so chop chop and get to it!

Soz, I'm hyper, anyway love it, I hope it becomes a long one.

Believe me, I'm a lot harder to impress than your average person.

Hey I like this a lot, even though I don't know what the plot is supposed to end up as or anything yet. Keep writing it please :)