Reviews for naranjas y gabachos
Isca chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I loved the Ted Bundy allusion - it added such a dark quality to this piece. :)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Oh, I had to stop in and review this right away when I saw the note at the top. :D I can see the Tori inspiration, for sure. Reminds me of Mr. Zebra and God and Snow Cherries From France, and that's just words in the poem. Toodles Mr. Jim, too. That one seems the most likely. Anyway, now I'm rambling. Tori's my favorite, as if you couldn't tell. Is it weird that I was excited to see the colon/ass ticks part? Because I wrote a poem called "asshole twitches" awhile back and while the content was a bit questionable, I thought the poem itself was pretty well done. The only comment I got on it was that it was gross. Haha. Anyway. This is lovely, and very Boys for Pele. :) Keep writing! :)