Reviews for Chronos
NsShadowSerpent chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
I like the wordy dialogue in the story. If you're going for a bit of a light novel feel, you've got it. That's the kind of vibe I'm getting from it.

There are a few tense errors, and some missing punctuation, but nothing too notable that will distract from the story. You can only correct so much as your own editor right? Interesting concept.

NsShadowSerpent