Reviews for Untold Opportunities
villainous chapter 2 . 13h
I'm excited this is entertaining and I like it
UnlikelyHero1 chapter 5 . 6/18/2011
I actually love this story, it's quite brilliant.

I'm trying to think of other things to say without sounding like a crazy, embarressing fan but I really can't.

Characters: believable

Style: well paced and easy to follow

Humour: plenty

I've author and story alerted, however I think the story's pretty much done as it is, but I'm definitely going to check out more of your work.
BobSince1934 chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
Wow. This chick is totally in denial. I love this story. :)
BobSince1934 chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
Now I have to go check the dictionary to find out if it's 'penises' or 'penii'.
BobSince1934 chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
I don't even notice that the chapters are short because it takes me forever to read them because I have to stop after every line and laugh til I can't breath.
BobSince1934 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
omg. I haven't laughed this hard in a while. I can't wait to read more.
morphine and lollipops chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
xD Your voice is amazing, and I found this story cute. Win!
learntosayhello chapter 7 . 5/18/2010
Hahaha this was so cute. It was really interesting to read femmeslash; I kind of even wouldn't mind writing it now xD I kind of strayed away from it because you know, being a straight girl and all adoring slash, but it's really not that bad. It's cute xD Thanks for opening up my mind; I can't wait to read the sequel.
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
lol, this story was really funny!and the ending was sweet
CoHOCD chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
:D I like it! It's very interesting! ... I feel like a perv for reading this, but it's good!
Vii Zee chapter 6 . 1/18/2010
Hey! :D I was so happy to finally see another chapter. I was like 'Wasn't this story done?' at first, but then a voice in my head told me to stop complaining and get on with it xD

I enjoyed it, even though it was pretty short. But, hey, that's what drabbles are xD

It was pretty nice to think that the two girls got on well for 5 months. I don't think I ever lasted in a relationship that long, so kudos to them :)

Good drabble, as far as drabbles go :D Can't wait for the next
Your Heroin chapter 5 . 10/7/2009
Oh, you made me feel bad for not reviewing. : Congratulate yourself, that rarely happens.

Anyway, I would read your drabbles!
Sara Tentis chapter 5 . 10/1/2009
would the drabbles be about these two in the future? if so than hell yah
RandoMaia chapter 5 . 9/1/2009
Hehe porn

Very amusing, well done, made me grin. As did your note to your anonymous fan. XD
BeccaPenguin chapter 5 . 8/26/2009
Haha. This was an awesome ending. It was so sweet, in an odd kind of way.

That was an interesting twist at the end, which I'm sure you intended.

But yes, this was a short but sweet story. I definitely enjoyed it. :)
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