Blah I usually wait till after I read the final chapter available or updated to before reviewing. Anyway I usually one read on fictionpress while I'm at work to pass break times or avoid actually working lol. But I liked this to the point I sat at home and read it. The characters are likeable and Fatima is more realistic then the primped up dolls most people create. The plot is fun and I don't know what's going to happen yet and that excites me. Keep it up and update asap for your loyal fans lol :)

I am really enjoying your story. I cannot wait to see what happens next, and absolutely love your characters (Fatima is realistic and likable).

A very lovely story. I really enjoyed it .

Coolio! I like he Ground Pound thing! That was AWESOME. Now, UPDATE!

This is so cool!

And not very many people know that if it's the same person but a different paragraph, you skip the end quotation mark! Godd for you!

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YAY SNOWBALL FUN!

me liked this. :)

I dont know what else to say so...

UPDATE! (eat my capitals. and my bad grammar)

thanks for the update

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now I'm confused... so I dont know what to put in my review...

so update to cure my confusion.

Thanks for the update:) So many twists:)

hi !

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Aah I'm so sorry this took so long to review! I was away and all the emails piled up in my inbox and I just found this one.

This chapter kinda reminded me of Harry Potter! In a good way :) Ivor's acting kind of nasty, and I wonder what he was up to out at night!

Wow! Great prologue. I like the way she thinks, something twisted yet honest about her. I'm really excited about where this story is going. KEEP WRITING...cause' I'm officially hooked. :)

YAY! Two new chapters! I really need to add this story to my alerts list...and I think something cool is going to happen soon, but that's totally up to you! I think everything is cool though, so what do I know?

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