Reviews for The Special Two
thelightoflife32 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
That's such a sad and touching poem :') I love the way it was said, it was poetic and lovely 3
MIZLULU chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Aww that is so sad :(

Like it btw!
SnickerSnack chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
you could really feel how the speaker in the poem really feels. his/her sadness gets to you and you can't help but feel the same. nice job :)
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Aww is right!

This is sad, but oh so sweet all the same.

I especially like the questions in this poem,

"How could I go on? How could I survive?"

Nice work with this!
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
It seems really proofread. Which is good. My pieces tend to be crappy and unedited. LOL! Anyhow... I had a favourite line... But I cant remember which one it was, sorry. Great piece of writing.
YFIQ chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Well written, if there's a fitting music around you can sing along with it.

Well done.
Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
The rhyme scheme you used for this poem was very moving, especially the lines:

"How could I go on? How could I survive?

My heart had been ripped, trampled and torn."

- These lines make the emotions in this poem relatible. It's such strong emotion and it speaks of something that everyone experiences, heart break.

Kudos on a wonderful poem
Mirabella chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
"Rich in love but otherwise poor"

I like that line. :)
ranDUMM chapter 1 . 7/31/2009

Aw *cries* Really sad :( Really well written, no criticism :)