|Reviews for The Special Two|
| thelightoflife32 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
That's such a sad and touching poem :') I love the way it was said, it was poetic and lovely 3
| MIZLULU chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Aww that is so sad :(
Like it btw!
| SnickerSnack chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
you could really feel how the speaker in the poem really feels. his/her sadness gets to you and you can't help but feel the same. nice job :)
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Aww is right!
This is sad, but oh so sweet all the same.
I especially like the questions in this poem,
"How could I go on? How could I survive?"
Nice work with this!
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
It seems really proofread. Which is good. My pieces tend to be crappy and unedited. LOL! Anyhow... I had a favourite line... But I cant remember which one it was, sorry. Great piece of writing.
| YFIQ chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Well written, if there's a fitting music around you can sing along with it.
| Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
The rhyme scheme you used for this poem was very moving, especially the lines:
"How could I go on? How could I survive?
My heart had been ripped, trampled and torn."
- These lines make the emotions in this poem relatible. It's such strong emotion and it speaks of something that everyone experiences, heart break.
Kudos on a wonderful poem
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
"Rich in love but otherwise poor"
I like that line. :)
| ranDUMM chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Aw *cries* Really sad :( Really well written, no criticism :)