Reviews for Beneficial
LimeSmoothie chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
oh i'm so game ;)

until next time!
firestar267 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
this definatly grabbed my attention :)

it just proves your talents as a writer that this and TBGD sound like theyre written by different authors, because not a lot can actually get away from one certain style of writing

you can :)

i like how the view for this is that sammy wasnt cheating on his girlfriend anyway because it was 'straight friends with benefits just because the girlfriend wasnt doing her job ;)', i have to say, i myself, would go apeshit and class that as cheating, but once again youre a brilliant writer because it made me hate his girlfriend and thats was that

i hope that made sense :P

i cant wait for more :)
dinosaurgiraffe chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Aw, this is so cute! I see some of Cameron and Travis from TBGD in Jack and Sammy. The idea of this story is so interesting :D I can't wait 'til the next chapter!
Helizabeth chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
you're totally right about readers being scared by a large block of black. i had to explain that to my friend. i think you did a rather good job of grabbing attention. the only thing is, at the very beginning it did seem like they were boyfriends, but i think that was explained in the summary i didn't read...
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