Reviews for For Robert
in theory chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
This is really dainty and gentle. Even though it's quite simple, "the scards that adorn your heart" make it seem like you recognise that he is still beautiful even though riddled with bad memories/experiences. And using the bad memories as fuel for a hopeful fire was also very unique, my only suggestion would be to use formal punctuation/capitalise the "i"s (just a personal nitpick).

Jack
Derek chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
aw thats so cute .

i loveles XD

.. twas like .. aw the whole time lol
rachel chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
o very cool jess! D
Aquabuddy chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Hmm, pretty good