|Reviews for The Armada|
| Isca chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
"Each footfall sighs forgotten psalms." I absolutely adore this line - it's stunning and graceful. I liked the allusion to the river Styx as well - the 'battleship' imagery was very vivid. :)
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
as usual, i admire your original turns
of phrase. sometimes the rhymes seem
just a little stilted, although it might
work well enough as a song, i concede.