|Reviews for Celestial Guardian|
| Shelley Anderson chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
in the first stanza you wrote "the say that" instead of "they say that". You might want to consider taking out the word probably in the third stanza. It takes away from the classic feel. In the same stanza you say "the golden hero who always got our backs". You may want to re-word that.
Very good. I enjoyed it! particularly the part where he fights enemies unseen by us. It was very good. I modern twist on a classic story and ballads in general