Reviews for Coming to Terms |
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![]() ![]() cliffhanger! pls update and finish this story soon sobs |
![]() ![]() KARLIE 3 |
![]() ![]() I love their somewhat snarky banter esp the last part of the chapter hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update ASAP! I'm hooked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm... I'm only a chapter in and I'm intrigued. I like how you made Charlie sarcastic yet likable. That's hard to pull off. You also use colored narrative really well throughout the story, which made me smile. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an asshole reviewer judging you. Even if you were pro-life, its your decision to think that way? I'm pro-choice too but I have friends that are pro-life and I support their decisions because they have their own reasons for making them. It's hardly anyone elses business, especially some anonymous person. |
![]() ![]() Please pick the sensible option of abortion. |
![]() ![]() I assume you're American and probably from a southern state. Neither drinking nor smoking pot is a big deal in the modern world although I understand much of the USA isnt part of that. Aside from that (and the anti-abortion stuff in a different story) I really do love your work. You're just too Catholic and/or Republican for me to be cool with the themes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D You should publish this:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad you're still updating this story. Even though I don't normally like stories involving bets, this has turned into one of my favorites. I just love the way you write, The descriptions, the dialogues, and the little moments between Charlie and Kale, they just flow so naturally. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please post the chapters! Love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good, i came across a few errors, but over all its a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great, kinda addictive story :) It's dramatic, romantic, funny... good work! |