Reviews for Coming to Terms
Gemma Browne chapter 17 . 4/22/2011
I really LOVE this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Faelen chapter 17 . 4/8/2011
Aw! Charlie and Kale are so cute together.
inkshades chapter 17 . 4/5/2011
awh, i LOVEE charlie and kale!

gosh, they just sound like the most perfect couple ever...

but honestly, poor kristin.

dom better pick up his act.

love this though:)

update soon! x
natmarie chapter 17 . 3/30/2011
Loved the cutesy-Charlie and Kale action. Also, way to reintroduce the bet. Interested in seeing where all this goes. So many possibilies. Bless you for being able to find a way to wrap it all up. :)
natmarie chapter 16 . 3/30/2011
I don't know if I've mentioned it before, but I love that you include parents and families in this and that they are so realistic. Often times writers leave them out all together or write them out due to some tragedy, especially in high school stories, which I find odd because that is a time you live with your parents so why can't they be there? You know? Anyways...the end shocked me a little, but I know Kristin will be ok with it all once it settles in and maybe there will be some kind of resolution with Dom? I like that Kale and Charlie get caught and the parents play it off as nothing at all. Adorable. Can't wait to see what comes next...which is good because another chapter materialized out of nowhere :D Love it.
Tahie254 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
i like charlie she's real, great start.
Faelen chapter 16 . 3/28/2011
Such a good story!
Faelen chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
A really well-written story! Please review soon!
natmarie chapter 15 . 3/23/2011
There was a little drama, but seriously, who doesn't love drama...at least when it in other people's lives. :) The Kale and Charlie developing relationship is adorable. Almost made me forget about the whole bet thing both of them have going on...are you going to revisit that? The Kristin and Dom part was sad, and touching and realistic. Sigh. Hope he steps up and she stays level-headed about it all.
inkshades chapter 15 . 3/22/2011
DOM! THE JERK!

poor kristin... that sucks man...

dom better come back. he can't abandon his child..

that's just cruelty...

or maybe some cuter, sweeter guy will step in:)
SophieInPink chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
The first chapter is wonderful! I really like this story thus far. Charlie is certainly unforgettable and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Sophie
inkshades chapter 14 . 3/19/2011
pregnant? yikes.

UPDATE SOON! you can't just leave us hanging like that, gosh!

hahah.
inkshades chapter 13 . 3/12/2011
awh, i'm absolutely in love with this story!

to be honest though, i only started reading because i saw the name kale in your summary, hahh. only because the main character in one of my novels is also called kale.

anyways, as i said, i love this heaps. especially how it kind of seemed cliche - no offense intended at all! - with the bet and all, but then charlie made a bet too! i was kind of expecting kristin to expose kale when she found out about his bet, but i'm glad that she's helping him win the bet.

but it's not really a bet anymore, is it?

mm, anyways. please update soon :)
escfan chapter 10 . 2/21/2011
Lol! This chapter was hilarious, how did you come up with it?

Love your characters, and the dialogues. So amusing. :)
natmarie chapter 11 . 2/14/2011
So I kind of almost screamed when I saw that this was updated. :) It earned me tons of weird looks from my co-workers. Oops. I'm all in favor of you posting what you have. You were upfront with us that you don't have an ending yet and might not. But at least fans of the story can see what you have instore for the lovely characters. But that's just me.

I like the build up of the bet and how things are falling into place. It runs almost like a movie, scene by scene the way you write it. You have a great style and sense of characters/dialogue. Humor too.

My only concrit is to watch your dialogue tags. Sometimes when a conversation plays out and you only have two characters the "he answered" "She asked" etc. can get clunky and mess with the flow of the dialogue. Also watch for when you include names when a he or she migh be less repetative. You use Kristin back to back in one part, where we already knew she was talking. You could have linked her to actions with "and" and the flow might have been a little better.

Missed you and this story. Hope all is well. Happy writing!

-Surrounded
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