| Reviews for ON HIATUS x That's What She Said |
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   Miss-You-Too chapter 3 . 8/19/2009 Lol, such nice friends she have! I wanna go on a road trip too... |
| Miss-You-Too chapter 2 . 8/19/2009 Ah! I love it i love it i love it! So originally started thought out and everything! I can so relate with Toni my hair only come out good if i go to the hair dresser and sadly I'm never going to grow from my 5'4 height, le sigh... |
| CuriousContradiction chapter 3 . 8/14/2009 Definitely one of the more original stories I've read on fictionpress. I think it would be really cool as a book where you could still have the same text but have pictures in the background, like different papers or illustrations or formatting. You also have a fresh style and snappy dialogue. I'm liking this story a lot. :) |
| Amaury chapter 3 . 8/7/2009 Your characters are so much fun. I really liked this chapter. We got to know everyone a little more. |
| abcdefgh chapter 3 . 8/5/2009 The character interaction is hilarious. Chapter's a tad short, isn't it? Keep writing. |
| Amaury chapter 2 . 8/2/2009 Amazing chapter. You have such a talent with writing. Road trip? How exciting. Haha. I can't wait until the next update! |
| speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 7/29/2009 i have no idea whats going on and i'm thrilled about it! |
| abcdefgh chapter 2 . 7/29/2009 Oh...road trip! I'm usually not a fan of road trip stories, but the interaction in this chapter between the characters makes me think a road trip would be fun to read. Keep it up with the character development. Good grammar and interesting characters. However, "jewellery" is misspelled; the correct version is jewelry. |
| takeabreath chapter 2 . 7/29/2009 Loved it! Haha I have no idea why, but the summary and the prologue remind me of the television show The Real World, or some sort of reality show. I really enjoyed this chapter, and I did not expect the group to take a road trip! When I read the prologue, I had no idea what to expect, or where you were going to take it but I love the road trip theme! Hopefully you post the next chapter real soon. I'll be waiting :) By the way, good job on this one! |
| takeabreath chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 this seems really interesting. it's got me wanting to read more, and figure out where you're going to take this! |
| abcdefgh chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 Intriguing, but I don't understand how the lists are relevant to the last lines. Keep writing. |
| Amaury chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 I really like this prologue. It was so unique. I'm excited to read more. |