Reviews for Geeks Rule The Planet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is very good. I've never read a story like this before. I wonder how it will turn out. However, I've noticed some grammar errors. Nothing really that bad, but you might want to work on that. This story has a lot of promise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seduce him! Haha, nice, wity intro here. I liked it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay update but the grammar kinda distracted me :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait to read the next chapter, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realise there are a few typos and grammar errors here, but plot and character wise, I loved it! The idea of the story seems pretty interesting and should provide lots of opportunities for hilarious situations. I like how the characters came together at the end, and I look forward to see whether Fergie gets her man... all in all, great start! ~ Luke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, glad to see that you're up with a new story here. You're getting like me lol! :D Okay, I think I can only review here since it's getting late at night now and I need to log off soon. Well, since this is pretty much of a summary, I guess I don't have anything much to comment here except that I really like the way you reverse the standard school romance drama. If there's anything I will want to see here, it will be tons of humour. I do think that this setting of yours would have a strong potential for that regardless of what you might have planned beforehand. To be very frank I did went "lol Michael Cera flick" here to be very honest when I finished the summary. If you don't know who is Michael Cera though, it means you're not schooled in affairs within Hollywood. That guy is virtually the nerd movie icon to say the least. ;) P.S: Pay back via The Eternal Grail. :) -From The Roadhouse. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this is interesting:) can't wait to read the rest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heres a review to turn that frown upside down:P I think Camerons reasoning was very realistic. So well done there. And the little sister being the parental was nice, bit cliqued but nice. I honestly dont notice any grammar mistakes in this, although i dont notice any anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! I don't understand why people would make fun of her (because if she is the It Girl, then they wouldn't DARE make fun of her) for liking Cameron. I wonder why he stood her up. What was so important that he couldn't show up. And why would he expect that she would do that to him. I'm the It Giel at my school and if I liked someone they wouldn't make fun of me. Well, Cameron sounds like a charming young man and Fergie sounds like a descent young lady, and Audrey seems really nice. Great plot. Perfect characters. And I just want to know the reason why people don't like Cameron. Geeks are awesome. There are a few gramatical/spelling errors. When you are using 'they are' you can mend it together as 'they're' when you are using, as example, "They are two beautiful liars," you can use, "They're two beautiful liars." And when you use their it is usually used as, "Their lies are true, but their hearts are false." When you use 'their' it is like 'they're' but is not brought together by two words. When you use the spelling 'there' you usually mean it as a place with a name that is mentioned in another sentence like "The lies they told will be forever in the hearts of the wicked right in there." Those are basically the only things you messed up on: the their, they're, and there. Don't worry, everyone makes those mistakes. But great job. What I would do is sound it out and write it out on paper and mouth the words out. Or get spell/grammer check on your computer. Do not worry. I hope this helps. Really, I do. :-) :PP ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, it's really interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I did not expect that ending...Haha, he can't have stood her up on purpose. He doesn't sound like that type of guy. For a rich popular girl, Fergie seems waay too nice. Kinda makes a change from the stereotypical b*tchy b*tches lol. ~ Sakina x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey hun, I liked the content here: it was all real cute, but this chapter does need to be beta'd as there are a lot of little typos and grammar problems that do detract from the reading of it. ~ Sakina x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha this is so cute! :) ~ Sakina x |
![]() ![]() ![]() "That was if you wasn't Frankie" I think werent would be better then wasn't. Well my spellings bad but whateva:P He stood her up:o Thats just rude. Huh id say people would attack the unpopular person in our school if he went out whit the best girl in our school. But anyway good chapter:P |