"popular est" I think most popular might be best there.

well she got her crush as a tutor:P Coincidenc. I didnt really see a problem with this chapter, i thought it was a nice way to introduce a few characters:P

Huh this is a clique turned on its head. Oh btw i added you on twiiter to know when youre about to update:P Youre description is good, Beyonce and shakira mixed...That would be kinda bizare looking:P

Hey, this isn't bad so far. It's an interesting twist to see the popular girl liking the nerdy boy since, I agree, there are too many nerdy girl and popular boy stories. It's getting interesting. I find it funny that Cameron is always turning her down, but she's still determined to win him over. I can't wait to see more of him throughout the story and also to see how everything plays out. The only advice I could give you is to maybe work on your grammar and stuff since I caught a lot of grammatical errors throughout this. Other than that, it's looking good. Keep writing! :)

LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT CHAPPY HOPE ITS SOON

I love this, hurry and update! :D

Well now, Fergie would have to be just a goddess to make either B or Shakira look fat or ugly O_o High expectations there...If you start off the paragraph like that, then you should give a well detailed expination of Fergie because here I was expecting you to explain thourougly how said girl looked...

It sounds interesting, but your flow seems choppy as if you are speaking to us instead of narrating to us, but then again, it could just be point of view so gladly ignore me

Blazn Via the RoadHouse Pay t forward :)

OH, ouch :( Poor Fergie. I felt sorry for her at the end of the chapter. I'm wondering if Cam will bring it up, and if he did it on purpose. Good work. I'll have to go check out those pictures you mentioned in your end notes.

I'm going to go with the assumption that you want CC. Along with the comma issues I mentioned in my other review, I though I'd point out these little errors to make your future editing easier:

been [] happier

Coughing loudly Audrey turned noticing the cheery mood Fergie seemed to be in. [We need to see who the modifier for 'coughing loudly' is; in other words, begin with something like 'Hearing a loud coughing, Audrey turned...'. I hope that makes sense.]

Audrey asked g[l]aring at

Grabbing her book's from her bag and then began looking at her maths book, which she then began to point to. [Not a sentence nor a necessary fragment. I would suggest tacking it onto another sentence or changing it into a sentence.]

questioned a[]lot.

Alright[,] alright[,] Sherlock[,] I'll

who you['re] getting tutored by

the chance to go out god help us then [needs to be a break around 'god help us']

Who would [have] ever thought that would happen?

Good luck on your next chapter! I look forward to reading more.

I actually thought the chapter itself was interesting. It gave me a feel for what the student body is like, including the 'popular' girls, and I thought it was nice to see some gossip taking place.

I'm not sure if you want hard CC in this chapter. I thought I'd point out a few typos/repeated offenders I found in the story.I always find it useful when reviewers point out errors so that they're easier to find when I edit/revise. If you didn't want CC, I'm sorry in advance for pointing them out :)

She was your typical Queen of Queen's school. [Was this supposed to read 'She was the school's typical Queen of Queens'?]

''Spill[,]'' Fergie said. [When writing dialogue, make sure to put a comma or ? before the closing quotation marks.]

(Example[:] Sharpay Evans locker.)[I was just wondering if this was pointed out for the reader's sake or if it was actually part of the scene.]

her ex[-]boyfriend, who[m] she still had

your time[,]'' Fergie said[, p]utting on her new shiny pink lip gloss.

asked out [four] days later.

"That[']s embarrassing! [Y]ou fancy

don't want to be l[ate] again

''Bye[,] bitch[,]'' [When a character is addressing another character in dialogue, make sure you separate their name/title/nickname from the rest of the sentence with a comma.]

I hope these little grammar tips were useful! I plan on reading the next chapter in a bit.

ADS, Roadhouse

Hmm, I like the idea, though I have heard of popular girl falls for nerdy boy plot before.

Now, I really don't have much to say about your story. It's good, and short, so it can keep readers interested to finish, not to mention the dialogue is alright. I can't give a full review until you finish the story, but it's a good job. You're best advantage, is the ending sentences for your chapters, it propels the reader to go to the next one.

I'm not captured by your story,so if you take your writing level a bit higher with more wit or a more doses of humour, (Popular girlxNerdy Guy Humour, I can never imagine angst.)

Maybe it'll get better in the next chapter, so I'll keep my eyes and mind open.

I really love this premise! Even in the stories that do have a geek guy/ popular girl scenario, usually it's the guy who has to prove his worthiness to the girl. I find this reverse hilarious. I'm sure I'll enjoy the story that follows it.

Also, I liked the pop culture references at the beginning. Teens use references like Beyonce, so why shouldn't stories? I always find it odd when YA fiction is lacking such references because editors are afraid it will 'age' the story.

Anyhow, nice idea!

oh neek boy standing up popular queen, some drama haha awesome )

So far, I'm liking the plot behind this story. Geeky guys and popular girls work well in my mind :). However, there were some spelling and punctuation errors. Not to mention that you're telling more than showing. The emotions appear to be too superficial to be believable. Still, practice makes perfect so tap into your inner perspective and bring out the best in your writing. Good luck!

Hey! Thanks for reviewing PD.

anyways. Lovely story! I can tell this'll be good!

I think you should change the title though. 'Geeks Rule The Planet' reminds me of cheese and spacecrafts... :P

Keep Writing!

x. alyona . iva

This story is awesome please update soon!

Great story so far. I wonder how Fergie's going to act during the tutoring.