|Reviews for What do You See me As?|
| KelaBelle chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Such a good poem. ;
| As Seen On TV chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Very good, I love the repitition here.
Keep it up, nice job.
| love fantasy chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
loved it! a real girl's prospective of first love..
| SilentVoices chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Okay, first of all, I liked the concept of your poem. I also liked how throughtout the poem you had a question that kept repeating. However, I thought that sometimes the rhyming seemed forced and strained. Sometimes rhyming dictionaries are good tools to use and sometimes not. Overall, I enjoyed reading your poem it was a perfect length. Thanks for sharing. :)