Reviews for Ravenwood
Holaa chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
Heey! I really like this story and it's really interesting! I've been waiting for an update for a while and I was wondering if you were, or if you discontinued this story? Well I know it's your creation and you can do whatever you want with it, but I'd really appreciate it if you gave an update or let everyone know or something because, a lot of people are waiting for SOMETHING to happen. So please and thank you yeah? Thanks!
We Used To Wait chapter 3 . 10/5/2011
Ahh, I'm so surprised the main character's name is mine. I mean, Serena isn't an uncommon name, but it isn't as common either. Not for an MC, anyway.

This is kinda reminding me of another story I read. It's scary. Family moves into a house, with a possible eerie past and eerie past-residents. Lots of trees. I really like it.

Update soon, please.

Chancel chapter 3 . 6/29/2011
I'm glad this is active again. I can't wait to see how the little boy and girl work into the main story. Please update soon!
ccRoberts chapter 2 . 6/26/2011
This is very well written and a definite great start to suspense. I hope you update soon, as I missed the other chapters before they disappeared. I love the name and want to see how it works into the plot.

Update soon, please.
Xandrea chapter 3 . 11/18/2010
This is a really interesting story. I really like the way you describe things. I cant wait to read more. :)
ScreamingMidget chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
cant wait to read more :] its real good so far.
Eden chapter 3 . 11/16/2010
Wow! Another update :D it took me by a pleasant surprise! I really liked this chapter, with the introductions of new characters. I also really like Serena's personality. She seems a bit edgy and really down to earth. The shifting between different time periods is intriguing, too. I can't wait for more!
Pseudonym59 chapter 3 . 11/16/2010
This is a really creepy story - with the little girl and boy. Plus the whole ghost story thing in the English class. I'm not scared, but there's a little tingle in my spine.

Good job on this chapter!
Pseudonym59 chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
I love buildup in this. It's in a way where you can just sense something's going to happen, but you have no idea what or when.

I got the whole stalker vibe from the summary. I have a feeling that I'm really going to like this story, but become super paranoid after reading it.

Keep going. :)
Blue Ravenn chapter 3 . 11/16/2010
Ooh, new chappie! Very intriguing. I thought I read chap 3 before, but this is new...

Please update soon!
AlexsandraGabriel chapter 2 . 8/30/2010
This story is really good, I keep feeling like it's going to scare the hell out of me ;) the girl & boy in the story, who are they? x) continue continue :)
larafrancesca chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
Sounds slightly spooky but I can't wait for more :)

Is the girl from years before Serena?

Plus, how old are the three girls? Is S. the oldest then J. and then L. the youngest?

Hope you update soon! ~lara~
Chancel chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
I like what you've done with this second version. Very good. I hope you'll update soon!
Blue Ravenn chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
As much as I really liked the first version, this one has more momentum. You've shown Serena more with her sisters and mom and she interacts more in this version. I like the creepiness to what she saw in the early morning fog and like how you brought in the other good stuff so fast.

Now update.

and thanks!
Eden chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
ohh my goodness! I have you on my alert list, so when I received an email that you posted a new chapter of Ravenwood, I couldn't believe it! Thanks a bunch for updating. The writing seems a lot more developed than your old Ravenwood, which I like! I have a feeling this will be a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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