Reviews for Haiku 2
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
I like this poem and good. I don't count sylables!
StickIntrinsic chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Cool essence to this but the form is a little off,

it's supposed to go 5-7-5 syllables.

Haikus seem so simple but I think

they're actually a pain to write lol.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
A haiku has three lines (as you've got here) but 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line and 5 syllables in the third line. Keep working on it, okay? Work the concept you've got here into this format and then let me know! I'd love to read it.

Anna _