I Really like your story! It's hecka good! You shouldn't worry about people not liking it... there were a few mistakes here and there in all the chapters but nothing to big. Ugg i hate where you left off.. grr... write more! Please! :) sorry i'm not very good at waiting for stories to be finished, its like putting a good book down when its getting to the best part. anyway keep adding to this story its uber good!

Oh, it is so exciting The developing love story i mean. And at the same time sad, that they will not be abled to save Michael.

Although it was a bit of a wait for this chapter, it was definitely worth it. I like the pace it's moving at because it gives you a chance to really develop the characters.

There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing too serious.

nice job on revealing some hints of Landon's past, though his past is still a little vague, and yeah i do notice that you have a lot of plotlines to work on in this story so i hope you can get around to tying each and every one of them.

And don't worry, this chapter was worth the wait, as i always say, good works don't need to be rushed.

So far I am absolutely loving this story. There's such a wide range of characters in it. I can't wait to see where this goes!

yummy

lol

this story has really captured my attention, an i really like that there is more than just one characters perspective.

great job so far!

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!

The kiss scene was totally the best part of he chapter it was like so hot with the way you described it. Truly the best moment in the story so far.

And the ending, it actually made me laugh and disappointed at the same time, laugh because I was imagining a funny expression on Matt's face, disappointed because I wanted to see more, but then on the other hand, if there was more then the story would be moving way too fast.

So will the next chapter be like where Matt comes to terms with how he really feels for Landon, or will it be a totally different person's point of view already? I don't mind seeing more of Matt and Landon's views, but I think it is high time to see another person's point of view, like let's say... Michael's since we rarely see much of the little fella.

Keep up with the good work. -

You have such a great way to describe the confusion and the tension betwenn them. I nearly could feel it. Please keep writing i really like it.

Very interesting story you got here! Strayed me from the path of the good girl that does her homework early! Go on, go on! I just need to read the rest! Even more now that Landon eyed Matt already!

I'll be waiting!

Compared to the update speeds of your other chapters this one is relatively fast, and it hasn't affected the length as well, for that I commend you.

But unlike the last reviews I have, there won't be any questions...

Okay maybe one...

Where did you base their characters from, are they based on real life people or are they purely fictional?

Other than that I leave you with lots of luck. -

Although i believe this is a very problem oriented story, your charachter, especially Matt and Landon, but also the girls, are very cute. It is nice to have insights from more than one character.

First english isn't my birth lenguage so excuse the mistakes I'll be doing... My first review, I read all chapters in one go. You have such a great plot and your charaters are really good, I especially like Landon, Amy and Evan. Yes I like Evan, he is a bastard and all good stores need a truly bastard, I would like to see more of him.

*cheers* Now we're getting somewhere in the story, it may be short but I feel it is a good turning point, and yeah I also notice that you have some trouble writing about Matt's point of view based on this and the other Matt's point of view chapter.

And as always I have questions... I bet you are getting a little tired answering them:

Will Michael have a crush on Matt?

I also noticed that Clarissa hasn't been introduced yet in this story, except for the first chapter, only mentioned so far, and I was wondering when she would be introduced... as in actually come to play?

And lastly... Will the comic strips be integrated into the story or will they be separate... like in another story?

Other than that I just hope your inspiration for this story and your other story won't falter. I give you my total support.

Can't wait to see Landon finding out "What the fuck was going on in this school?". I wanted to see him hiting Evan. Landon and Matt's first meeting was what I had expected so I kind of liked. There's something on Matt thet meke me like him, maybe I'm weird. Ohh next week is so far away... It's good to know that you are liking to write this story becouse I'm liking to read!

The chapter was okay... though it would have been a little better if Evan got beaten up a little like with what happened with Brandon.

Landon's and Matt's first meeting was actually something I expected, basing from last chapter at least... So since the next chapter will be a week after, I have a feeling Matt's opinion with Landon will be changed a bit... am i right?

Anyways, keep up with the good work -