Reviews for Alpha
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2017
I didn't sign in cause this isn't actually a review, more of a reminder that you have fans.
I wonder if you'll ever come back to this. I hope you do cause this had me hooked before you stopped updating. In case you're thinking it'd be weird to just start again after so long don't. I've seen authors continue stories after almost five years of hiatus. So umm come back on your own time just as long as I can read more.
AP chapter 9 . 12/31/2016
Hi!

I just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this story of yours and I love the characters as well! (I also really like Adam and Fury together! ;) Also Adrien and War!) I would love to see how everything pans out and the story develops (and who ends up with who ;p )

I hope you haven't forgotten about, or given up on this story, because it really is good and I think you're doing a good job!
Shiina chapter 5 . 8/21/2016
I still can't believe Adrien's father whores his son out and Adrien just lets him! And it seems that Fury knows that too. He should freaking DO something, aren't they supposed to be friends?
Shiina chapter 5 . 8/21/2016
I feel disgusted when I read comments about how Adrien should be with War when they just read a chapter about him raping Adrien. What the hell is wrong with people?! I'm seriously losing faith in humanity.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/19/2016
Really love this, wish there were more chapters tho
Reeciez chapter 9 . 2/25/2016
So a new start huh? Where is the rest? Come on~ I'm dieing here! I gave you a month just one chapter would be nice. Pretty pleeease? 3
lyraanette chapter 9 . 2/24/2016
yaaay...
rachel1836 chapter 9 . 1/25/2016
Glad you are writing again :) can't wait to see what happens!
MaddamAndRobin chapter 8 . 1/25/2015
Still loving this story. :)
MaddamAndRobin chapter 5 . 1/23/2015
I'm all interested in War and the pill and his men. I can't wait to find out what is going on there.
MaddamAndRobin chapter 4 . 1/23/2015
(For your authors note above, I love waffles and puppies and waffle puppies!)
Oh my goodness, Fury is going to freak out when he has to save Adrien! Eep! Come on, chapter 5!
MaddamAndRobin chapter 3 . 1/22/2015
Eep! What's gonna happen with Adrien! What's Fury gonna do! *on the edge of my seat* I love it! Oh, and I was going to tell you that if it's a girl, she's blonde. If it's a boy, he's blond with no 'e'. I always forget that when I'm writing and have to fix it in edits. Anyway, on to chapter 4! xoxo Robin
MaddamAndRobin chapter 2 . 1/22/2015
Your author note is frigging adorable. I hope you had a nice birthday. I loved this chapter too. I liked the idea of the dancing by the eligible females. Very fun. I skipped over all the lyrics. I'm not much for lyrics in stories. It always pulls me out of what I'm reading. I'm interested in War. Is he really truly a bad guy, or is he going to be a good pair with Adrien!? Eep! On to chapter 3! xoxo Robin
MaddamAndRobin chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
*happy noises* I love ch 1 of this story! I love the characters and the world. Everything makes sense. The only place I was confused was about what happens to their clothes when they shift. Really nice physical and behavioral descriptions. Can't wait to read more. xoxo Robin
ilovetodance253 chapter 8 . 12/26/2014
Bruh,you said that you didn't bail on this story,lack of continuation is bailing ...please continue
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