Reviews for Alpha
Lerene is to lazy to log in chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
*cry!* You had Adrien raped. :(
Lerene is to lazy to log in chapter 4 . 5/28/2010
your idea of a submissive is pretty neat. It's not somethings I've read before. Whereever you go with that, I'm okay with it.

I still be believe is the bigger ass, dick, . .(puts more cuss words) and hope he doesn't become something important. Like Adrein's mate, I'll be mad if that happens.
Dreaming Maya chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
Kyaa! Adam's dad sounds awesome now! I'm gonna be his #1 fan! Is War and his pack druggies? They sound like it, plus Adrien deserves a happy ending! GIVE ADRIEN A HAPPY ENDING, okay! Also, the Prince seems a bit weird ... I'm even gonna say lewd ... UPDATE!
xoxlizzie chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
Another excellent chapter! I sense something between War and Adrien...lol. Update as quickly as possible, I am excited to see what will happen!
Jess chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
I wish you'd stop posting short annoying vague chapters, why don't you wait and write more then post. That way we don't have to suffer this crap on the rare occasions when you you finally do post up an actual chapter.
Jess chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
I wish you'd stop posting short annoying vague chapters, why don't you wait and write more then post. That way we don't have to suffer this crap on the rare occasions when you you finally do post up an actual chapter.
sally n chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
yay for the update! it was great i like fury..especially if he'll be a good leader for the pack update sooner than soon!
dreamercrys chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
Okay. so, I am not going to guess who War is but I am going to guess that War is the one who gave Adrien the scars and that the little red pill he takes may boost his strength and make him feel no pain but I also think it is to suppress memories... Just guessing. Can't wait to see who will win Alpha and who Adam will choose and if Fury will finally realize Adrien is in love with him...hehehe... Love it! :D
DNAstar chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
aw i love Adrien, your a meanie for letting him get hurt *angry face* i hope fury hurts war lol love the story hope Adrien doesn't get hurt again like that he's so cute and stuff
Capricornia chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
So cute! I love your character! Every single one of them. The Three are the best! All of them combined would be the perfect man! hahaha. I'm not sure which parings to root for yet, though. It's so difficult! Hope you update SOON! So that I can make up my mind!
Midnights Scream chapter 5 . 5/26/2010
I'm kinda mad that Fury didn't pay more attention to Adrien. the fact that Adrien was kinda forced and yet Fury then shows up only to call him a slut. Not cool.
Esquirella chapter 5 . 5/26/2010
You're playing this plot very close to the vest. I don't know who will end jup with whom, or who is apparently drugging War's pack. Very cool suspense!
Handsome Devil chapter 4 . 5/24/2010
Omg. I was going to turn back and not read this because I don't really like Adam much. sorry, sorry, I apologize profusely, but man, I LOVE Adrien. And Fury. And I want them together. I really, really want them together! :)

Please update soon. I still would also like to find out about Adam, but I never liked a submissive male. I just don't. I guess you can see why I prefer Adrien and Fury together. :D
CB Scarlet chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
Okay, there's something I have to say.

Maybe I'm a sick, twisted individual, but I like this thing between Adrien and War. And, let's be honest, I am SO not the only one (coughadriencough).

MOAR ADRIEN AND WAR.

MOAR FURY AND ADAM.

LESS PRINCE. :O
vanilla queen chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
the prince is pissin me off ... zack and adam .. and fury and georgian pweazXDXDXD these are the most adorabe couples pweazw let em be together
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