Reviews for Alpha
Esquirella chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
This is a very intriguing start and I'd love to see more!
myheartisyours chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
nom nom nom, as my firends in england sometimes say- that basically mean yumx 10. the guys in this tale are so hot, though you did kind of portray them as a joke once the prince made an appearance. I love this story, tis HOT but i think there shouldbe some serious competition make the price work for his pudding ;)
jinglelamp chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
I am really looking forward to this progressing. It looks very promising - just be careful to steer clear of the cliches and I think this fic will turn out really well!
Blo0d StaiNed Rose chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
oh please update, this story sounds so promicing...i already love it andi cant wait for more...please update soon...please:):D
k9kittens chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
It's good, it's very good!
Mistress Lonewall chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Well, from what I've read, this is by far something actually worth reading. I like the characters a lot and the plot is...flexible for a lot of open ended things. I look forward to the rest of it!
NEMY-VIVI chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more
Johnny101 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I can tell that I am going to love this story! :D
CB Scarlet chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Hey, I liked it. :] But I must say, Fury is my favorite. I hope he and Adam end up together.

The prince is evil. I can just tell. haha. :D
keikochan100 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Don't be dsappointed in this with this chapter, you did great.

I can't wait for you to update..
Kistune Princess chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Please continue this story, its great and i was sad that the chapter came to an end, i can't wait to read the rest of it.
bahlovkarizma chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
I love it, sounds great, I like The Three, and the price, update soon!
Yes I Write chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
:D Loved it! You know, i wasnt gonna bother reading it because i was put off by the werewolf thing (i didnt mind twilight, but the whole fandom thing really put me off, so ive avoided all stories with vampires or werewolves) but its good that i read it because it was a really good story! update soon!

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