Reviews for Alpha
LEEDLEEDLEEDLEEE chapter 5 . 11/28/2014
Hmm, it seems like Fury is the only one out of the three with the most dedication to (winning over) Adam. The other two are off to their own ways.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2014
Haru chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
Okay... really good! Some mistakes that just show sloppy writing but overall, the plot is pretty cool. One quick question: How does nothing happen to his clothes when he shifts to wolf-form?
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AnimalLover411 chapter 8 . 7/10/2014
It has been 3 years! We need an update!
Nytes chapter 8 . 12/29/2013
I love this story! Even siyh a 9week old baby instead of sleeping i find myself reading this! I hope you start writing on it again!
ZedFireify chapter 8 . 6/21/2013
This story is one of the first stories I fell in love with on this site. You know how it is, a lot of the stuff on here is amateurs trying out there keyboard for the first time. It's especially hard for new slash writers to write effectively because they get distracted with the gay element thinking it is something that needs an introduction, like the idea is alien and needs to be explained. But you don't so much have that problem. I love your characters too, and I love this story. Though I must admit bringing back War as somewhat friendly guy confused me. He seemed more of a means to an end character, meant only as a device to bring out Fury's protective gene because (of course) the pairing I was looking forward to was Adrien and Fury. You have been gone so long that I have dreamed up a middle to the story to tide me over till you get back on your "Alpha" writing feet. unfortunately it only lasts so long so, I eagerly await your return. Please, please, please start writing again. ZEDFIREIFY
Anon chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Please update this story, I love Adrien and War :3
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 8 . 2/15/2013
O ...( speechless )
Talysse chapter 8 . 1/9/2013
Your story is so well! Love it!
I hope you can continute it!
See you soon
1113brooke chapter 8 . 11/18/2012
I like this story. However I'd really like to see Fury and Aiden get together over the whole Aiden-War, Fury-Adam-Wolf Prince thing that seems to be happening. Aside from that, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
It seems that Adam's character is too contradictory. His thoughts say that he does not like the social system that he is in but his actions say that he does. I think there needs to be a set decision as to where is character stands.
The Stygian Angel chapter 8 . 7/23/2012
Plz update as soon as possible;) Can't wait to read more:D LOVE this story!
magister02 chapter 8 . 5/18/2012
luv the story so far.5/5
Boo52 chapter 8 . 9/16/2011
Please please PLEASE write more! I am addicted to this story! lol. I am begging! lol
nookybooky chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I love this story, I really like the detail you've put into it. The pairings are wonderful! I can't wait to see more Fury/Adam. War is a character I can't fully grasp though... You've put suspense into this very well and I will keep reading so take it off hold!
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