Reviews for Alpha
Whitewolf Vamp chapter 8 . 7/6/2011
it was certainly a surprise to see u update this was one of my favs and still is im glad to see it updated and hope u update the next chapter much sooner :)
Nasty Nonsense chapter 8 . 7/5/2011
OMFG! That is the BEST werewolf story i have EVER read! And oh ny god... The descriptions of the characters was simple mouth watering! *drools* i loved every second of it! Please continue writting the next chapter soon! XD From your new loyal fan, Nasty Nonsense P.S i loved fury the most! His sooo hot! Love ya! *faints fron over whelmhing joy*
JeneyaStorm chapter 8 . 7/4/2011
well surprise upon surprise... I have to admit i thought you fell off the face of the planet... I had to read the story from the beginning to get back in tune with it... You just have to swear that you won't abandon it, If you have author's block then say something dun leave us hanging like ... hmmm

wow... Adam wants Fury to win... can Fury and Adam be soulmates... The prince...arg... who do i really want to win?

Wonder what would happen to Adam if Fury doesnt win...

Well I like this chapter and i hope that'll you continue the story!
lylabitezx chapter 8 . 7/2/2011
How old is Adam?
DNAstar chapter 8 . 7/2/2011
OMG WARS NICE, is Adrien his mate? (do they have a pacific mates in this story? you know like they smell there mate or something? (War saw him in his head so... and not as a sex thing too, and so did Adrien with the wolf in his dream, you didnt say that it was Fury) anyway i hope the prince wins the fight not that i dont like Fury but i dont like him with Adam plus the prince and Adam where getting along good, ok now back to War, is he going to be good now (i know he want be good for a bit or straight away) or is he going to be bad till the end coz if hes good i could like him more, after the last two chapters i can see that he likes Adrien even though he doesnt know it properly yet, are you going to explain why hes bad? coz he takes the pills to get rid of emotions so something must have happened for him to do that, and are you going to let Fury them together (not having sex or anything like that), coz i can just see Fury getting so mad when (if) that happens. i think War and Adrien would be good together but only if War doesnt do anything bad to Adrien again.

-_- this would be my longest review i have every done on this
Princess Hurricane chapter 7 . 7/1/2011
Ok well first, I'm so happy that you've decided not too abandon this but seriously tell me is Adrien a submissive and will he end up with Fury or War and are they brothers? I like Adam and Zack but I'M IN LOVE WITH FURY AND ADRIEN MORE! I think that his(Adrien's) story is a lot more interesting than Adam's and his conflicts seem a lot harder to deal with. Also whats up with the prince I feel like he is gonna get dirt on fury from War or something. I'm hoping this will be a fury and adrien rather than fury and adam. Still loving the story

PS if adrien is a submissive will he have to fight adam for the title of head bitch
jessicas favorite stories chapter 8 . 6/28/2011
UPDATE!

its dead but maybe revive it?

such a good story
hellokitten16 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
you had me at the begining. ) i feel u on da whole no disclaimer thing.
Mashkai30 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I love your story so far. Is it one you will be continuing or is it abandoned?
Princess Hurricane chapter 8 . 6/23/2011
OMG UR STORY IS SO GOOD. but though adam is really cute i like adrien and fury better. it would b really sweet if like during the alpha text that adrien gets in trouble with war and fury leaves so save adrien but thats just me. great job keep up the good work
The Smallest Wishes chapter 8 . 6/17/2011
GAH! Hurry up and update!

No need to offend you or anything but I'm more interested in Adrian than Adam for some reason. Maybe it's because Adrian is the guy version of my middle name Adriana.

*Sighs* Man, I was hoping this story would end up with FuryxAdrian and NickolasxAdam. But I don't mind if this story goes into NickolasxAdrian and FuryxAdam.

As long as Adrian isn't paired up with War I don't mind. Speaking of War, I have a feeling he is going to start a fight with the Hale pack. I also think that he was involved somehow with Adrian's scars.

But hey, I could be wrong. I'm just a reader/fangirl of this story and your the author. I could have the complete opposite of what your planning to do.

Oh well, as long as you update (and write more things about Adrian) you'll never lose me! :D

Update soon ya hear! :D

~Wishes~
runswithvamp chapter 8 . 6/4/2011
DONT REWRITE TILL YOU AT LEAST FINISH THE EFING STORY im sorry but i love ur story and you shouldnt be thinking about wat is already written and move forward. i want to read the ending. im sorry if i came off way too strong i am normally much more polite i just hate it when authors do that. please please please update. i seriously do love ur story. its like a good version of the book blood and chocolate
Poptart Guava King chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
BUT THE ENDING WAS SO CUTE. D:
moon01234 chapter 8 . 5/16/2011
You just had to stop there? And you're about a year without updating. More for me please?
Soraya Zeeva chapter 8 . 5/2/2011
What a horrible place to end! What happens next?
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