Cheers for embaressing friends!
You story reminded me of when one time this friend of mine had just started going out with this guy and me

and a group of other saw him and her sitting on the school steps and talking from far so we all shouted her

name together and started waving our arms and she looked up, blushed deep red and buried her face in her

hands. Later she told us that he had said ' don't worry, even my friends are just as embaressing'!

WONDERFUL

Very cute, I loved the ending. Great job!

"I've got us some seats that nobody can steal. In a cinema. Tomorrow night."

That's just so adorable! :) I love it.

liked it.

Haha,

I like ;D

LOVED IT TO THE BONE!

the ending was a little rough but all in all very cute

Part of my name is Rani. My sis' and my mom has it too. Very nice story and keep poppin' out them plot bunnies!

Cheers,chica!

That was so cute! For some reason, i feel like I've read this before. Loved it anyway! :P

There were some little mistakes I saw here and there (like here instead of where), but this was a nice, cute, creative little fantasy, haha. And I really liked it. (: I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2.

I had to find out what a sixth former was from wikipedia! Hahahaha. Cute story! :] I'M STILL WAITING FOR MY MAN! Where ever he is... in the universe.

Aw :) I really like this! The gradual developement of their relationship to the incorporation of his friends. Lovely.

Beautiful.

Oh my. I submitted the longest review of my life, but only the first word got through... your name, well that sucks. [ I guess I'll have to rewrite it. First of all ! Huzzah, dedication the the great Becca, finally! I've been waiting all my life to be acknowledged D ( That better be me 0_0 ) Then I think I rambled on about me imagining you and Nick *dissed his lame hairstyle* and proceeded to talk about my cousin Max running a toy car up my crotch (He's only 3. Don't worry) Although he did have an evil grin on his face as if to say "I know what I'm doing". Well I loved the concept of stealing chairs! I've been there, horrendous. I mean I've given names to chairs, fallen off chairs, fallen on chairs. I've even had the whole clichéd "Hey I'm gonna kick the chair so you fall on your ass" thing happen to me. Which one shall always remember, Maths, pft. Who needs it, falling on your ass though. Wow. I also imagined the great C (short, bald fella)being in this, I mean he would so steal your pens if you asked him too. Heck, he'd do it without your approval! xD Oh, I also gave you some tips on your next chapter, which should so be a cnimea murder. I mean whats better then having a murder on the first date D *I even mentioned the seven deadly sins and brad pit, however I can only ever remember four of them and i only know what two of them mean* what do those bloody sins even do anyway? We already have the commandments, what next! When I rule this country I think I'll adress this problem. Anyway! This story was as awesome as murder! Like you my best friend ( I hope I'm allowed to say that xD ) And one shall see you! On our date next thursday. You, me , your brother and the secretary. And of course our results '[ So remember, next chapter, cinema murder. I hope this was a well deserved praise. xD The Future Ruler of the World, and previously adressed as World Dominator, damn my long and hopelessly pointless review.