This was sooooo incredibly good. Since it's been like 84 years after you updated, I guess there's no point in asking you to update.

noooooo why it was getting so good

It's been ages but please update the story ... it's going good so far ... why did you stop...

oh no! is there not going to be anymore?!i just saw when you last updated!

aaaahhh!poor boys, years too early for them to realize that talk does help! great job so far!

this is looking good!thank you for writing it!

I really love this~~~ please update soon

love the beginning!wish i had an imagination...

Btw, I was the Guest that left the last review.
Was just too lazy to log in until I was told to in order to follow your story.

Can you please update?
I am now in love with this!
And I am begging you, CONTINUE!
Thank you for your hard work btw :)

I will literally kidnap you if that is what it takes for you to finish this!

Pls has been ages.

wait a min.
shouldn't nate be angry on kieran as at one side that he'll have nate for himself and at the same time kissink another guy.
Nate should make kieran feel low nd the chances of having nate turned fron 0.1% to 0.0%.
like if he's cjeating now when kieran should b most loyal as he is trying to have nate then what will happen when they will be actually together..
u know all the way ur story was perfect till now but this point makes ur story a weak point. i hope u undrstnd. :)

"I'LL BE ABLE TO UPDATE A LOT MORE FREQUENTLY"
:c

That is some quality stuff right there, Honey. The details are just enough to outline a colorful mental image, but not too overbearing or unnecessary. There were only a few minor errors that weren't distracting to the story. The plotline has a lot of potential and has been captivating so far. Plus, even the few intimate moments that have happened so far are hot enough to get the reader tingling in all the right places. It is with eagerness that I anticipate future chapters.