Wow this was intense, but I liked it! Very unique! ;)

Finally some yaoi.

Oh my gods! –nosebleed- Two of my favorite things wrapped up into one throbbing MASTERPIECE! –bows-

Dearest Dusty, love, you have gone farther than I have ever read anyone else go! I cannot explain my joy in reading this! –tears up- The end made me cry with joy! The on-going plea for open eyes and then, finally, the other’s inability to do so but still the plea remains? GENIOUS! I’m in love with Drea! He kinda reminds me of Cesar in that movie ‘Gladiator’ who wanted everyone to love him to the point of tears, but he also hated the whole entire world! –shwoon- Peas in a pod, my friend, peas in a pod! Wonderful wonderful!

And now… CONTINUE!8D God knows how much fun you could have with this! –wiggle- God knows how much fun people will have while reading it! This extreme realism strikes straight to the heart, I mean, the part about having to fuck ‘you’ for so long in order to get ‘his seed out’? I found myself nodding my head! His logic, though obviously wrong in so many ways, makes sense and emphasizes the fact that he doesn’t know the difference between right or wrong (that or he just doesn’t care). I LOVE IT!

o.O Creepy...I wrote something like this once, but I had it the other way around: a vicious uke and calmer sort of seme. This is pretty good. w