Reviews for Tug
Thaeya Blaire chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I wonder, what was it under the bed? Don't tell me a zombie! :B

And I like the repitition of certain words such as "Pull" and "pulling". The usage really added to the emotion of the story.
Tawny Owl chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
This was very simple, but still managed to be really creepy. Actually the simplicity was probably what made it really creepy because my imagination went into overdrive. I think it also worked becasue the monster under the bed is something that we can all identify with.

The beginning dragged us straight into it, and the almost open ending, with the repitition of pulling, really made me shiver.

I wish I could write that coherently at one in the morning.
Fay Diablo chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Well, I really like this...Mostly because that was how I always was, wrapping myself like a burrito in my blanket so that the monsters couldn't me. Because, somehow, my thin little comforter was supposed to be armor against the flesh-eating zombies.
VelvetyCheerio chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Hey! I just want to say this piece really sent shivers down my back, it was that good. That last sentence just really did it. So good, it was a perfect piece.

Happy writing!

Velvet.