Reviews for Ergo Sum Unus
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Hah, right, I was going to review this. Sorry, 2:30 in the morning and all...

Wow, as I was reading this, I could almost feel my own thoughts coming out on the page (though much better worded than mine would ever be). Like I mentioned before, it's great to feel so much relatability with such a personal topic.

The bluntness of this was also nice, and refreshing. A lot of poems I've read about atheism try to mix it up in a bunch of complex words and phrases. While those are prettier on the surface, this really shows your raw feelings.

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Isca chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
"I don't believe in God." The tone of this opening line is so blunt and honest - it blends well with the rawness found throughout the piece. Nice title, as well. :)
HitchSlap chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I read your poem, and it was like looking into my own soul. God died for me a long time ago. Thank you, friend. Keep the strength.
Haunted-By-Scars chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I am a nonbeliever as well, and My favorite thing about this has to be the title. Great reference to the main point of this poem. :]