Reviews for Ashrah
Isca chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
"Carousel lights." Stunning imagery.

The wide/pride rhyming in the second stanza was very striking and crafty.

"Down the precipice of candor's wall." This is my favourite line - it's very mature and well-phrased.

"Saccharine." Excellent word choice.

Keep up the good work. :)
GaIn chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Absolutely beautiful. I loved every word of it. You certainly have an engaging style.
OrangeConeDramaQueen chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Beautiful! I especially like how you describe her in the first verses :D