Reviews for Competitive Closeness
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
i kinda liked this one more than the samuel and annie one cos i can totally relate to the semi crush thing paired with the friendship and competitiveness that these two shared:)
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
this was brilliant! keep writing:)
Lily Llynn chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
I actually thought this could've been better than Samuel and Annie, but the only thing I didn't like about this was the end scene, as I felt the near-rape was quite unnecessary. Still, I really liked this. (:
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
This was cute. A little excessive, but very fun. I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 2 . 8/19/2009
I do love your characters when you make these one shots. I do believe you should remove the complete status and make it a series of several one shots ;)
MarieAnn chapter 2 . 8/18/2009
Aw this was really cute. I liked both stories. Great job!
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
That is so so cute :D

love it
x3life chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
aw, this was cute )
Hopelessly Cliche chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Aw, this was really good. I loved that you kept the whole competitiveness all the way to the end, even when they were confessing their love for each other! ;) A really good oneshot! )


annoyance chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Great idea!
animegirl214 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
ahaha. aw~ thats so cute. XD

why'd she say "Daniel" at the end though?.. his name's Samuel... lol
Brennaka chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I usually don't like one shots, but your story was absolutely adorable. I was awwing like a crazy person by the end. It was super cute and well written. Keep writing like this and I promise I'll read all your stories. ;D