Reviews for i am a library
writingpistachio chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
GAH! How the heck do you get the inspiration to compare yourself to a blinking SEMICOLON! This had me in awe the entire time. It's amazing, the way you're so impressively piecing together seemingly random metaphors to make the whole thing flow. And the improper capitalization just... well, for once it didn't irritate me. It added, somehow. You are amazing. I will go check out more of your work later.

Thank you.
R. Douglas chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Well, it's a good thing I didn't go to bed tonight.

This poem is wonderful. First of all, enjambment is awesome when used well. And you do use it well. The transition from the first to second line "i am/ ink..." creates a great flow and leads right into some amazing imagery.

Each stanza is ripe with a voice of your own but easily connects with the reader.

Awesome job, please keep writing.

R. Douglas.
Jazzball chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Hey, I was completely in awe the whole time of the structure and wild images you've captured. Well done, I think I'll read some of your other things
Shiro.Kokoro chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
is neat. i like it.