Aww this story had me drowning with its moe-ness.

Damn, I loved the ending of this story! And how thy both describe love in the end. It's like I was waiting for them to confess, but their eyes spoke everything for each other.

Very cute. Thanks for sharing.

aww, this is so awesome
I love clichés

My favourite kind of romance :)

The story has succumbed to clichés but that is not bad at all. It has some fresh concepts and I really like the main character. Although "best friends in love" is an overused concept, I think you pulled it off with amazing writing and characters who seem alive. Thank you for the great read!

That was just the right amount: not overly gushy writing, but not detached either. I'm still not sure I'm a fan of cliches though; they make for interesting discussion about their origin, but (as their nature would suggest) they're over-used. Paradoxically, chronic avoidance of cliches is also a cliche. There's no winning.
From the point of view of someone who brainstormed ideas for a story last night for 3 hours only to write a lame-ass 2 paragraph intro, I understand her frustration. I was having a tough time not punching a hole through my walls or computer (it was due the next morning).

ADORABLE! AMAZING! And i keep on coming back. I just really, really love your writing and I feel like the characters just come to life in my head. You make me wish you would just keep on writing and writing. And the best friend thing never gets old, lol. THREE CHEERS!

Awwwwwww

Aww! How cute! I love how she didn't have to tell him and she just figured it out on his own! I completely understand how she feels. I have tried to write romance stories...just...no. Luckily, there are wonderful writers like you so I don't have to torture the world with my horrific writing. :) It was really good for being so short. Anyway, um..yeah. I liked it. :)

This is such a sweet and fluffy oneshot. :) I've always loved the best friends-in love cliches the best. Awesome story!

awww! that was really cute! i wish you d written a little more but i love short stories too.

aw love a good cliche story :)

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This was a rather enjoyable one-shot.
It's cute. I kind of wished there was more to it since the whole realization of her liking her best friend happened a little too quickly, for me at least.