Reviews for dear blank,
kit feral chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
I have quite a few favorite lines here. But I'll pick my very favorites.

answering questions with ten-letter words that had small meanings

i wonder if you're all digital now, if you've thrown out your old grandfather clock

I really like the entire concept of this. Lovely.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
This is very thought-provoking and beautifully crafted. That first line is just so insanely good.

The whole thing, really, was just very good.

Keep writing!
C. S. Johns chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I really like this, it attached itself to me, and it stirs up so many questions in my head. I like how it seems you've described a long journey, but in actually very few sentences, just enough to form some kind of picture of what was, what is, and what might be. You made me extremely interested in the people in this story, without even having known them for more than a few seconds. The "(anymore)"s are almost heartbreaking to me. I've never been one to fear change, but I guess there are some things that you wish will always stay the same.

I don't know, I just know I like it. And I wonder how they met.

Thanks, keep writing!