Reviews for if i could say this better
Isca chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
"Disconnected." The tone of this word is so striking. I like that you formatted the poem the way you did - it gave the piece a stop-and-go feeling that added to the angst. Keep up the good work. :)
Jhaynee chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I liked this very much, I could just feel the emotion.