Reviews for Schizophrenia
immortalangel08 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Oh wow. I don't think I have ever laughed harder at a stor then this one right here. When I saw the prompt I wasn't sure on how this was going to work but you did it perfectly. "It suddenly hit him. Could it be..? No. That was impossible. Surely Sean was kidding. There must have been a really swirly vortex of ominous green light hovering mere inches above the skyline."

My favorite line that when I first read it had me dying.
Tearlit chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
The story line was rather intriguing; I especially enjoyed the end when the voices popped up in the chief's head. However, your grammar is in need of work. I especially noticed you used "your" when it should have been "you're." The way you incorporated the prompt, as a hallucination, was well done. Nice job overall!
originalripperwrites chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
dang this is good i love it