Come back! Things were starting to get interesting!

Aw, please update soon, I've missed this story so much!

I realize you wrote this story over a year ago, and odds are you won't read this, but if you do id lovelovelove it if you continued this story. (: I think its cute, and I'm rather fond. Of it.

I am so in love with the story so far and hope you update it very soon. I'm so anxious to keep reading this, it's just so good! :D

Yay! :D

You're forgiven. Can't wait for your update. I'm glad things are looking up for you.

Ohmygosshh, lovethiiss

i'm pretty sure this story is the single most predictable thing i've ever read. ever.

aw cute story. I love it! BTW I like how you are taking their relationship slowly. Stories where they fall in love in a day kind of annoy me. I really like the character Dayton. Sam and Jordan are cool too. Update soon I want to see what happens.

-nick

Aw, last update was...months ago! UPDATE, DAMMIT, OR I'LL PERSONALLY TRACK YOU DOWN, INSTALL A GPS CHIP IN YOU, STALK YOU EVERY DAY JUST TO GET UP IN YOUR GRILL AND SCREAM "UPDATE!" AND IF YOU DON'T, I'LL FIND SOME EVIl, MUTATED SQUIRRELS WITH A TASTE FOR HUMAN FLESH, INSTALL GIGANTIC BLOOD DRAINING FANGS IN THEIR MOUTHS, AND GIVE THEM ONE OF YOUR DIRTY CLOTHES ARTICLES TO SEEK OUT YOUR SCENT AND NIBBLE ON YOU PAINFULLY ALL THE WAY TO YOUR COMPUTER CHAIR UNTIL YOU WRITE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Was that nagging enough...? D:

xD Ahaha. Wow. I hope I didn't freak you out too much. :D

What idiots are complaining about you updating too fast? Geez. The sooner the better for me. Although I'm glad the relationship is going "realistically slow" as you put it, I want more! Lol :)

"F_ me in the backseat, f_ me in the backseat."

Dude, you've got respect from me (not that it really amounts to anything) for mentioning the Medic Droid XD

Interesting story so far, great imagery of the boys, and also the bridge. Looking forward to reading more of this! :)

Aw, don't put it on a hiatus. I'm so happy you updated. Who...

I like this chapter, the detail is good and everything. I'm starting to like Jordan more now than I did before. This dialogue is amazing. One of the best dialogues (is that a word?) I've ever seen.

Happy Holidays.

Nag nag nag. I like this story :D

And I'm nagging you to update soon -

so, i'm in school and saw that you posted this WITHOUT TELLING ME. i'm mad. :( butt the amazingness of the story makes up for it. heheh. i'm really not liking the slowness for obvious reasons but i'm also loving it. it seems a lot more real now. :) so keep going and update sooner!