| Reviews for my love making is hard and impetuous |
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   May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/11/2009 I really liked this poem. It's raw, vivid, and I've felt this way myself also. |
| kit feral chapter 1 . 8/6/2009 this is lovely, in a very fucked up way. I think only people that have been like this would be able to relate and see the beauty in it. I'm not explaining myself very well, but I really like it. |