|Reviews for my love making is hard and impetuous|
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
I really liked this poem. It's raw, vivid, and I've felt this way myself also.
| kit feral chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
this is lovely, in a very fucked up way.
I think only people that have been like this would be able to relate and see the beauty in it.
I'm not explaining myself very well, but I really like it.