Reviews for Rescue Me
Isca chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
I think it's interesting that the speaker keeps begging for someone else to save her - clearly, she doesn't believe that she's strong enough to save herself. The words 'too small' and 'sealed tight' really gave this piece a claustrophobic quality to it that I really liked. Keep up the good work. :)
excentricreativity chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
This poem was very good! I love how you described your pain in a claustrophobic way, it was innovative and fresh.

This poem seemed to have a lot of raw feeling ot it, not like something you worked and worked on. That gave ita better sense of emotion.

Good work!

-EC from the review marathon (Link in my profile)
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I agree with you. The lack of capitol letters made me focus more on the words themselves and not the technicalities of them.

Interesting piece in general. Not the most original image, of being trapped in your own mind, but you described it well and really helped me envision it.

Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
HitchSlap chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I think we're all waiting to be rescued

All we can do is keep our head up
jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
didnt get to sign in. i really really like this. it makes me think..