| Reviews for Nightmare with the Neighbour |
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   MeAsIAm chapter 17 . 11/1/2010 LYLE did that? I can't wrap my brain around that revelation...I'd kind of hoped it would be someone from the Desai camp (or is it and Lyle was just a cover for the ones who really killed Lea's father and decided to use to boy to cover their tracks?) I can't understand - why the engagement? So that April and Lea may not act against Lyle? You've got me intrigued, update soon? |
| non.graceful chapter 17 . 10/31/2010 :( I was hoping you'd put more up... |
| eminemluvr chapter 17 . 10/31/2010 Wow never expected that haha that's wicked! I love this story can't wait for the next chapter! |
| GermanSam chapter 17 . 10/31/2010 It was an interesting change in the story. I liked it though and now you've created some dramatic irony that is to say when the audience knows more than the charaters just in case it wasn't clear. I liked the mystery of it and how Lyle and Lea unknowingly know about this as well. Until the next chapter... Happy Halloween! |
| pockets are my friends chapter 17 . 10/31/2010 It was a little weird, but I didn't hate it. And it had a smidge of humor. I can't believe Lyle killed him though! I hope everything gets cleared up soon. |
| Dr. Lighthouse chapter 17 . 10/31/2010 Woah. Lyle. Holy cow. Lyle. That was beautifully done, you made that twist sort of jump out of the page and punch me in the face. It was a bit confusing at first, how it was from Lea's mom's POV. You should stick in something at the beginning to explain that. Also, the names were a bit confusing, since, until now, none of the adults have beed referred to by their first names. That was confusing. Other than that, though, it was great. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| StripedSocksPrincess chapter 17 . 10/31/2010 Happy Halloween! Its a great chapter! I'm just loving this story even more! Please continue soon! |
| do not click chapter 17 . 10/31/2010 no! Lyle cant kill him! thats sucks :( |
| Dr. Lighthouse chapter 16 . 10/31/2010 Ghoul, ghoul, GHOUL! Just one word of warning, though, Daya sounds really cheesey in this chapter, with all the 'I know you'll do the right thing' stuff. But it still works okay. There wasn't much Lyle-Lea stuff in this chapter. :( Anyway, love it, update soon! |
| hello evening chapter 16 . 10/31/2010 Ghoul! |
| apple chapter 16 . 10/30/2010 ghouls are fugly! V cant wait for part 2! |
| non.graceful chapter 16 . 10/30/2010 *sheepish smirk* Love the little punishments.. espeacially the hangman game :) :) evil and angelic in both ways(not hangman) ROFL! Hurry up and write it's the 31st! |
| StripedSocksPrincess chapter 16 . 10/30/2010 Great chapter! I seriously need you to update as soon as possible! I need to read more! Its getting so interesting! |
| Mantis Pie chapter 16 . 10/30/2010 ghoul ghoul ghoulie ghoal,. Haaha I love leah as a persom |
| friendly pockets chapter 16 . 10/30/2010 I love this story, even though it's pretty weird, but those are the best stories, so yea, can't wait for more! |