| Reviews for Nightmare with the Neighbour |
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  Guest chapter 21 . 12/31/2013 I decided to reread this three hours ago, when I was bored out of my mind. It was a good choice. Although I love love love the d/s dynamic between Lea and Lyle, the fact that there was never really any consent given to the things he did makes me squirm. They may not have really been in a d/s relationship, but there were definitely hints of it. I first read this and wrote Lyle off as a bit of a psycho. Now I just seen him as a lil' kinky dude that maybe a little emotionally damaged. But in this chapter I do think he's grow, come to terms with himself I guess. I really hope to see more soon! |
| please continue chapter 21 . 11/2/2013 This was amazing but is it the end? It cannot be, tell me it isn't |
 SweetHeartCandy chapter 21 . 9/21/2013 Ghoul |
| Renee chapter 21 . 8/7/2013 Please please please end this! I'm dying! I need an ending please please please! I really really really want to just get it over with, otherwise it will just haunt my thoughts D: |
| Gii chapter 21 . 7/21/2013 Holy Mother of Pearl! I didn't bother reviewing every chapter that you put out there. I was engrossed right from the premise of the story. I love the who dun it aspect of the story. Being set in the Uk, and with nobility involved, it sounds like the Game of Clue. I love the romance (love/hate relationship) between Lyle and Lea. I cannot wait to read more and find out who, what, how and why! The only criticism I have is the minor spelling and grammatical errors that crop up from time to time. But that might be because of the software used. |
| Angry Elf chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 Martha Greenwood has stolen your work on Amazon. She can't even be bothered to changed the summary or names. The editor "Paul Luong" is involved in multiple thefts from FictionPress. |
| ravelsticks chapter 21 . 7/16/2013 Okay...so I finished your story in one day, and now I want some more. Please finish this and let my brain have some peace of mind. I want to know what happens next. |
| Princess Wanderer chapter 21 . 6/24/2013 moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremo remoremoremore. I very much like your characters |
| Jai98 chapter 21 . 5/12/2013 Just started reading this today and read all the chapters. A really addictive story indeed. I so want her to trust Lyle. Oh and ghoul. :P |
| dizzydreamer99 chapter 18 . 4/1/2013 just as a note, £300 pounds is like putting $300 dollars. It's the sign or the word. I think it's just a silly mistake though. I think it may be a nice time to revise your story and check through it, after all you must have written it sometime last year..? |
| dizzydreamer99 chapter 7 . 3/31/2013 Just for a bit of research, in England sunrise isn't 2pm in October. Even in the depth of winter, by half 8 the sun would be up for sure. I would know, I live in England. You might want to put that the sun was already in the sky. It would give the 'omg i'm late' factor a bit more exaggeration while you're at it. Sorry, I know it's petty, but it really bugs me when I spot things like this. |
| dizzydreamer99 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013 I love it! I adore the way you got her to hit him round the head with a shovel, so funny! |
| Jynx4Ever chapter 1 . 3/24/2013 love it. |
| girlsruntheworld7 chapter 21 . 3/24/2013 Wow! That story is hooking! But are you writing a second part to this? Beacause i reallllllllllllllllllllyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wanna read it! |
| Purplekitten98 chapter 21 . 1/6/2013 This is a really great story, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it so please update soon! |