I love this book! Its so different to all the cliche romances, and its really captivating unless your one of the people who have bad patience. *Sneeze.*

Upload soon, i cant wait to see Lea's reaction to this..

oh. hm. it sucks he's a killer.

ghoul.

I saw the 399 at the top and decided you deserved a review to make it a nice 400! :D

Extensive editing, congratulations. I like the fact that you have taken up that daunting task and faced it head on...well, you get the gist. Suffice to say, I don't like editing much :P

The tone seems to be the same in all the chapters and I admire this consistency. The characterization of Lyle and Lea has been spot on. I especially liked the last line of chapter 20, which sum up all the feelings of Lea and her confusion towards the treatment he metes out - I had been right all along. Lyle was never human – he was a murderer.

Love it! Will be waiting for the next chapter.

OH...MY...GOSH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HE WAS GOING TO TELL HER HE LOVED HER! B-BUT LILLIAN! THAT BITCH! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH I COULD CRY! PLEASE I AM NEW HERE CAN U PLEASE KEEP ME UPDATED ON THIS STORY? PLEASE LET THEIR LOVE SHINE THROUGH! 3

I'm beginning to like her...

Hello! I'm from the sister sight of Fictionpress; it's called (if you didn't know...which you probably do). Anyway, I was just wondering what types of stories are on this website, because I write regularly for Fanfiction, and I came upon this story.

I love the unusual ideas and characters you have made up, and the romance is perfectly paced. Not too fast, but not so slow that the story is boring. Great story, and I'll be reading and reviewing whenever you update!

OHBOY.

Well, my blackberry was spammed with 10 emails notifying me of edited chapters of this story, so thanks. (; ha, anyway, this twist really is the icing on cake. I was already liking it for it's easy going-ness, but the delicious turmoil between Lyle and Lea is what makes me craycray. Lyle killed her father? FANTASTIC TWIST. This reminds me of what a GREAT story this is. Now, you've left me with a cliffhanger, you've gotta update soon. Spam my blackberry anytime!

oh, and "ghoul".

More please :) its very entertaining and makes me laugh so hard it's ridiculous! I love how wacky Lyle is and no one sees it! Jeez. Seriously add more soon :)

Ghoul.

oh, and update?

Lea and Lyle have such an interesting relationship. Very strange. I wonder if something like that could actually work in real life?

Anyway, I'm really excited for part two! Looking forward to reading it soon. I hope you have fun writing it.

Sorry for being away for so long!

Love, love the end. It's like the edge of the , really. I'm chewing my nails desperate to know what happens next!

Just when Lea was warming upto Lyla, and vice-versa Lillian had to come in between.I'd just love meet her in a darkened alley.

Waiting for the next chapter. So please, update soon? :)

I KNEW there was a reason I didn't like Lillian! She's so devious, just the kind of character you love to hate. Great job!

ITS BEEN AWHILE! I had to scramble over the chapters to see which one I was on~; but im back! And I STILL LOOOVVE this story~ :D Keep it up~ :3 hehe

~Kaitlyn

K.I.T

Xoxo

Okay wow. Was NOT expecting that.

! cliff hanger! haha... love those... *sigh* wow.. murderer. did not see that coming... anyway... ur right on the 6months thing.. kive wait AGES! for this ting and its finally up sooo... WOAH!