I like this chapter; your writing is really clear and descriptive here. Lea really has an apple pie fetish, it seems lol. It's so weird that Lyle has like, a double personality, but at the same time it's kind of mysterious and intriguing. So far this story kind of reminds me of this manga I read called Hot Gimmick, where this rich, spoiled boy bosses this shy girl around and makes her his sort of sex slave :P It's not as creepy as it sounds... sometimes jk haha! Anyway, good chap, except I CANNOT believe that Lea actually went back to Lyle's place! Like, really? Now she asked for it! And it totally sucks that she can't even count on her own best friend to believe her!

Ghoul 100%! I can't wait for the next part! I'm so glad you finally updated, even though it kinda makes me feel bad about not having updated any of my stuff lately...

Just one little criticism (did I spell that right?)-when Lillian barges in on them, I wasn't sure-was Daya with her or not? It's a little confusing, since in the previous chapter, Daya was talking about Lea marrying Lyle and being rich. You might want to clarify whose side Daya is on-and why does she say "my 'filthy mother'" when Lyle was talking to Lillian (I think). It's just a little unclear.

MURDERER? :O i never would have guessed...i wonder who he was accused of murdering?

Oh hot dayum! Sh!t just went down. Intense. MUST. UPDATE. SOON!

OMG! You Updated! Yay!

I love your story!

I'm so addicted to it!

Its totally one of the best on this website!

Please update soon!

You've obviously been getting reviews saying how happy people are to seethat youve updated after such a long time, thus I won't be saying it :) but you know that I would have.

The scene didnt particularly well as you finished as quickly as you started it... I thought it was idiotic that you made us wait for so long that the halter wasn't up to it's quality...

Overall great job.

omgosh you must update soon, that was such a cliffhanger! and can lyle please stab lillian in the chest or something? ohh but i don't want him to be convicted. hmm maybe push her off the balcony and say she tripped? anywhoo, i love this story so much and i can't wait for the next chapter!

After reading your story in the record time of two hours, I think I'm in love!

Please update soon!

Love,

- Ed

OMG this chapter was the best so far. I can't wait for the next part, I only hope it'll be ready in a few weeks, not in 6 months, pleasee.

I really love the way Lea and Lyle are getting closer and closer. Also, when Lilian showed up with those news, I felt nervous, you know, like having butterflies in my stomach lol. Anyway, it was a fantastic chapter. I think it was worth to wait such a looong time for it, thank you for the great job. And thanks for mentioning me, made me blush aww 3 .

I can't wait for the next part. Keep on writing, 'cause you're too good to stop. This story is definitely my favourite from this site. Love love loooove it.

Cheers and good luck with writing! I'm so waiting for the next chapters :)

Great chapter! PLEASE update SOON! :D

Okay, I have NO right to flame this because it was somewhat AWESOME! I love how you had that witty, funny end there! :) I find Lea an altogether pretty cool character, with her funny thoughts, even though I find it weird that she didn't bother screaming when Lyle started attacking, she didn't kick or hit him as he blindfolded her, and she didn't faint when he pointed a KITCHEN KNIFE at her. But the ending had me laughing for a good bit. I wonder if you're British; your writing has that British idk, accent to it. Anyway, good chapter! :)

Ghoul.

Nah just kidding. I know reviews mean a lot to authors, so here i go.

Your story is amazing and really interesting. i love that it's not another typical romance story. it's different, out-of-the-box. i love all of the twists in this story. it keeps the story interesting. i also love that on the surface it seems like lyle and lea are stuck in this hateful relationship, but when you go deeper, it's so much more complicated and their hate isn't what it seems. It's like the predator-prey way they act is how they express how comfortable they feel around each other and how familiar they are with each other. this complex relationship you have fabricated sets this story apart from other romance stories and makes it truly interesting. And when you switch between Lea's POV and Lyle's POV, i get an interesting peek into what goes on in Lyle's mind. I get to see his motives and his personality, which are both really intriguing and different from a typical male protagonist who's in love.

i saw that you haven't updated since december. not to nag or anything, but please update! i am so curious as to what happens next!

Keep up the awesome work!

I really like this story. Lyle is a wee bit messed up but kinda lovable if that makes sense. I hope you update soon :)

ahhhs so gooooood hahha plz update soon annndddd YES! SAILOR MOON FOREVERRRRRRRR 3 hahaha

-pandakim:)

Sooo I think you should update soon :) I know, it does sound like a great idea! I have to know how this story ends haha its bothering me:)