i read both your poems and i like them both a lot.

i'm down there are only two, i want to read more!

speakeasy

So you decided to go with this version of the poem, eh? D

Like I told you earlier, it's a really great poem . Don't get discouraged if lots of people don't review. Fictionpress is a pretty big site and like I said, most people here go for those romantic cliche stories /

But I guarantee more people will review you D I like the different meanings you put into your poems. Continue writing!

~Angie