Reviews for Wind Blessed
Avra-Sha Faohla chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
That prologue is so intriguing! And the first chapter is great. I am loving where this story is going. The elemental-"blessed" thing is wonderfully exciting. Do continue, Beth!


The first time you mention the name Prentiss is in this sentence: "Brisella was certain that when Sel was producing, Freya would make herself a familiar face at the Prentiss home, offering milk and butter whenever she could spare time for the trip." Since I did not know that Brisella's surname was Prentiss, I was a bit confused about this sentenlce. I'd recomkmend trying to slip in the surname some other time earlier in the chapter.
SMFD27A chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
I see things in this story, and I like it. I know that you can't rush inspiration, but a year and a half? Really? Luvubye!
Kit chapter 2 . 2/16/2011
You just keep getting better and better. I'm kind of jealous.
ChocolateCookie chapter 2 . 2/16/2011
aw, this is really well written. I'll be looking forward to it continuing.