|Reviews for Detention|
| The-Addicted-Subscriber chapter 71 . 2/8/2010
bonus and atc in a chap... that's a first..
| Tilly of Silly chapter 70 . 2/6/2010
OMGOSH! That had to be the most wonderfully longest chapter/long chaptered book I've ever read! *huggles, then feels slightly awkward about it and shuffles akwardly for a minute then returns to happy praise banter* (on a side note this makes her thinks shes turning into Kairos which frightens her makes her wonder if she will start to tote around a bunny (a bunny simply because she once had one, and she can't be totally like Kairos)) Anyway this was fantabulous! I just love the plot, even though really I'd be weirded out if it happened in real life but...I love this. I love all the characters (yes even Jennal, simply because she is so necessary to the plot! On a side noter I do not approve of wait she did to Kane!) I can't wait for the end even though it will be sad when I reach the end but I really want to find out! Anyway I've really been wanting to do the Ask the Characters ever since it started so I have individual comments for each character. Here we go! *feels like peter pan, smacks head for telling you this but obviously I don't regret it to much or I would of just one back and retyped it but hey I enjoy doing really weird things that tend to have me end up in weird/akward (even though they're th same thing) situations. ONto the thing! Yeah...not qite as dramatic a I hoped..Moving On!
Mira: I think you are a wonderful character and I really glad that youu found Kane! Or at least someone to love. Anyway I've notcied that Kane has...how do I put this..and ego the size of a blue whale..or two. To deaflate once in awhile *whispers into Mira's ear something that sound strangley like dye his hair* Do with that as you will.
Kane: Kane, Kane, Kane as I said before your ego is large and freqently needs to be deflated, and I will be here to help you to day. *looks straight in eye* you are not smexy. Heck I don't even know what that means but assume it's an idliozed handsome. Anyway why people would call you smaxy in front of your girlfriend and the girlfriends very intimidating cousin (admmitedly under lock and key of Shina) is beyond me. Anywayget over your self. YOur annoying..admittedly enttaining but very. very . ANNOYING (Mira if I've insulted you by insulting your boyfirend for you please take over anytime.
Well that's all I have to say for now because i's bed but I'll get around to you eventually, that is if Author-chan lets me after all my spelling eroors, sorry bout that, I can't see what I'm typing the review button always malfunctions on me. Anyway thanks for reading my review
-Tilly of Silly
| ashalayy aka freddi d chapter 70 . 2/6/2010
ahahahaha! i knew he would do that! BRILLIANT! and when there be another ACT cuz i miss them!
| ashalayy aka freddi d chapter 69 . 2/6/2010
WHAT IF KANE GETS RAPED AGAIN, AND THEY GET MARRIED IN VEGAS BUT HE'S DRUNK AND DOESNT REALIZE IT UNTIL HE'S THE FATHER OF JENELL'S BABYY!
| ashalayy aka freddi d chapter 68 . 2/6/2010
ahahah a sadistic kitty! *yay kaito-kun!*
| ashalayy aka freddi d chapter 67 . 2/6/2010
ouch, what she said was harsh. i honestly do admire kane with a new passion because he never ever let's Mira see how hurt he is. he's staying strong, even when he's dying inside...
| ashalayy aka freddi d chapter 66 . 2/6/2010
*makes a baner* GO KANE GO!
| Suppusan chapter 70 . 2/6/2010
i feel bad... even after this whole thing Kaito did, i still don't like him and i feel like a jerk *sniff* well the plan was creative
| Kathrynzala chapter 70 . 2/6/2010
Oh, but poor Kaito-kun, having to kiss Beaumont-sensei as part of the plan. Yech.
And poor Kane-kun, with such harsh treatment from Mira. Even when he's this ambitious, he's gotta be upset at the recent developments!
| Bluey306 chapter 70 . 2/5/2010
Oh maiz, poor Kaito D: But he was a very very brave boy :D He deserves a good pat on the back! ...I mean a NICE and GENTLE and FRIENDLY pat 8D
| AllegroConBrio chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
oh, foreshadowing at the end there!
foreshadowing is fun, no?
| AllegroConBrio chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Hi! uhrm, i'm new here,but it seems that this story has some good reviews- and a LOT of chapters... yikes! but i will definitely read it- pretty great beginning, i must say!
| Suppusan chapter 69 . 2/5/2010
i like this new update-very-quickly-with-small-interludes thing thats going on :D I hope that trend keeps going _ hm... ANYWAY, UPDATE SOON and ill be a happy person in a blizzard who's going to get 18-24 in of snow and possible no school on mon. Not trying to brag or anything ;)
| Kathrynzala chapter 69 . 2/5/2010
Yay, extra points from last time AND cookies! The Beatles really are so awesome.
You accidentally called Kaito Kairos once, but the chappie was really interesting! I wanna know their little plan~!
And Kane-kun, even if Jenell's an evil little nasty word lady, (even though i still can't bring myself to hate her) it's not nice to lead her on and use her and stuff!
Oh, Hadwin-kun...I'm so in love with you! I know you love me too, right? RIGHT? *scary glare*
| Chloeee chapter 69 . 2/4/2010
69! Yay D lol!
*huggles 69* D
P.S. good chapter )