|Reviews for oh conscience|
| Isca chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
"I want my conscience to be closer to my lips." This line really caught me off-guard. I like it. It's almost as if the speaker wishes that her moral values were more akin to the words that come out of her mouth - as if she didn't really have any control over the things she says to others.
"Another bullet of courage." Brilliant comparison! Wow! :D
| secretpart chapter 1 . 8/8/2009
Wow. I loved your metaphor of courage being like bullets. I could completly relate to the persona, and the poem's rhythm was engaging."the silence is starting to blend in with tension
but the tension fades into sweet goodbyes
another bullet of courage, let me close my eyes..." is definitely my favourite part. -hearts your poem- :D.