Reviews for Trials of the Heart |
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![]() ![]() hey! its me again lol! i think you did i really good job with the story :D i don't think its all that corny, i just thought that you were kind of repetative but overall it was really really good! (just listen to my advice on the bottom comment) anyways good luck to you! |
![]() ![]() no offence but the story was kind of corny. I know you only wrote this to let your pain out, which is really good because i do that to. i think though that you still have that small place for him, in your heart, but honestly you should just stop thinking about him, even though it may be hard, and think about your future, because i believe the right guy will come for you naturally-hahaha i know that sounds really lame lol :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this :) sequel maybe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! What next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah this guy is a total douche but yet I understand how the heart wants what it shouldn't want. Great feeling in this story though the typos were more apparent this time rather than less. Still, can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I really feel for this character and her deep love for this boy. I am really liking this story though honestly there are a few typos here and there that take away from total perfection. Still, an amazing read! |
![]() ![]() it was a nice story! :) there was suspense throughout! i hope that you make a sequel to this so that there would be and ending! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was GOOD! i liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() dont u just love reading ur life through someone elses words? though the difference is im stuck in only one phase, the whole me bing in the background/teasing thing. lol it was brilliant though |